Saturday, 7 January 2017

Final Pages (Official) with Feedback from Tutor

Changes to pages after feedback

The slight changes that I made with my pages were where I wanted something to be written to make the colour behind it white because just in case a scenario happens where a teacher sees some of my activity pages they could easily make copies of them if the backgrounds of the text are white and the written spaces are white also they could easily print them in black and white to avoid printing in full colour which can be quite expensive. I should have really done this in the first place because one the teacher who works at the National Archive (Annie) made the point of the printing factor and you don't want to have to print off 30 plus sheets off in full colour. Furthermore I added actual photographs of the individuals because that was a point that came up in my feedback and with my illustrations of each person going spare I wanted to use them in some way because I had spent some time on them. So I tried to introduce them into areas of pages that needed subtle additions added to them just to make them more interesting to look at. Also I went through each page checking for typos/spelling mistakes as that was another point that came up in my feedback.











Feedback Screenshots





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